Friday, February 10, 2012

Lose it . Just to get it back..





**As the lazy me didn't paid attention to my teachers while they taught tenses, this very post was full of grammatical and tenses errors.. but its been now edited by my editor and a dedicated critic's .. :)
so here's is an edited and better version of my our post :)  **

live, laugh n love is the motto we hear too often...
(even my slippers says that).. 

so, i tried to write something worthy that could give the feeling of love with a glimpse of smile ( laughing won't be possible.. though no one is stopping you.. ) 

its my tribute to all the love birds ..  ( have to say this after bring held responsible for someone's breakup)
have a happy Valentine :)


LOSE IT..  JUST TO GET IT BACK...


Walking on the street in the pale moon light,
was all alone, there was no one I could find.

It was dark and I heard someone weep 
following the sound, I went a little deep
and reached a bench in the park..
with a young girl sitting alone in the dark 




There were tears glistening in her eyes,
she was a pure beauty, I admired her while she cried
took the seat next to her and didn't say a word..
when she looked at me, I could sense that she is hurt..

I asked the reason for her loneliness and why she cries?
she was shocked that who am I to ask her why?
but then she felt, as a stranger she could trust n share
and told me that this was the same bench where
she and her lover met for the last time 
before he died..

Today its the same day they last met an year ago,
she said this bench makes her feel he is near..
I felt the pain of loss evident in her tears.
I felt moved n water filled up in my eyes..


I tried to console her and told her not to cry 
she leaned on my shoulder n felt little fine
i cracked a joke on which she did smile,
made her realize how beautiful she is when she smiles,
we shared some time, she told me about her life..
I told about mine, before we said gud byee...


now that she is gone, I feel little strained..
I walk to that bench daily hoping she will be there,
I didn't know that single night will change my life
will make me fall in love with the strange life..

its seems like that bench is where we both lost our love..
its now an year since i am coming to that bench..
crying at the same bench where she..
rolled her tears last year..

All of a sudden a cold breeze blew,
felt a hand on my shoulder of someone i knew..
turned to see, who is there in this dark
there she was with the tear in her eyes..
we both smiled and looked into eyes..
we didn't say a word and kissed in the pale moon light...


sometimes... you lose it, just to get it back..  <3 <3  :)


do fall in love..

and if want to feel a laughing side of love then do visit  http://vinatikamani.blogspot.in/2012/02/thing-called-love.html

p.s.- "thank you" .. will not justify lovely work you have done, so "whatever " :P

time to go.. have to find such bench.. 

Be yourself and Hold me always ...
Gaurav J.

12 comments:

  1. have said it before.. you have an amazing way with words..
    but had to clue that applied to poems as well...
    it ws beautiful.. :)
    the concept.. the title n d words.. awesome !!! :)
    p.s. - the new look of the blog is pretty gud too.. :))

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    1. Poetry is just one of many other qualities of mine :P
      n i prefer not to say "thank you".. :)

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    2. Watevr works equally fine wid me.. :P

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  2. Valentine Homework !!!!
    Gud Goin Buddy !!!!
    Bring It On !!!!

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    1. Thank you bro..
      after all.. i have to do it twice.. one for you..
      :)

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    2. i hav submited my homewrk ,,,
      hop it wl wrk dis time !!!

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    1. aww.. as if in positive way ??
      anyways.. whatever :P

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    2. Aww..as in d best possible way !!! ;)
      N btw .. Thanks fr d free publicity.. Hehe... :) :D

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